Monday, February 24, 2014

Comments for Ashley and Alex

For your Comments on this Justin Bieber Presentation:

1) Write about something done well.  What did you learn from this Presentation? What element or part of the Presentation stood out as particularly well done?

2)  Offer constructive criticism to help this group.  What seemed to need more work or development?  What questions do you have? Where could the Presentation have offered more or been more polished?

Post your Comment about these two things in the Comments section under this post.


  1. Great job guys!

    Your presentation overall was good. you had some interesting facts that i had no idea about so i enjoyed listening to what you guys had to say! I liked that you both took turns talking and you both knew exactly what you wanted to say. Their were no awkward pauses and your presentation flowed smoothly!

    I can't think of anything you did wrong and i know we have to have some positive criticizim soooo, try not to look a your note card as much and try looking at the audience? i know i'm nit picking!

  2. Way to go!
    You two did a great job. I liked the teamwork. I am also glad that it was you two giving the presentation on Bieber and not me. I thought you both had equal time talking and both of you were very knowledgeable about your topic.

    Overall Great job! The only advice I could give you guys is maybe use some different background colors on your power point slides. They were a little difficult to read. Easy fix. Great Job!

  3. Awesome job guys, I enjoyed the presentation. there was a lot of information that I did not know about him prior. you guys worked well together and it really showed in the amount of team effort in the project.

    I thought the project was put together well. But maybe in the future a little bit lighter color choice for the background on the page with the car. I think that because of the color of the car, it did not mesh well with the rest of the page. but other than that it was good.

  4. Great job!
    You guys did great and I love that you bashed on the J.B. I like that you comapred him to other young kids who were going through the same thing so good for you.
    I would have to say that you can make it a little more fun add a video or something that showes us. But after that GREAT Job

  5. I really liked how much info you had on him and also how you talked about his negative effect on kids. The only thing I think you might have added was maybe a video of the little girl he had pictures and stuff of at the concert, other than that I think you guys did a good job!


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